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Prayer

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The childhood’s innocence ended,
When with him, you blended.
Now it remains a far away memory,
Of imitating your mother in a red sari.

Now in your womb,
You bear a sweet fruit.
The seed is strong, they said
But, oh! So are you?

Your in-laws they masqueraded,
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Wednesday, October 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: choice,misery,mother and child
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dear friend its really good poem the way you expressed each and every feeling elevated your poem! keep writing and sharing dear! all the emotions are clearly and beautifully expressed! nice job sanika!

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Sanika Khairnar 30 January 2016

thanks a lot for commenting pranayee! !

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Chinedu Dike 16 November 2015

The intricacies, care, pain... of motherhood are well depicted in the poem. A well articulated piece of poetry insightfully penned with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Sanika. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Sanika Khairnar 19 November 2015

Thank you so much for commenting. it is really a motivation for young poets like me.

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Pamela Sinicrope 14 October 2015

Wow! This is a powerful poem about women. So sad and tragic, yet hopeful. You've conveyed the plight of women very effectively. Thanks for sharing.

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Sanika Khairnar 16 October 2015

Thank you so much for viewing and commenting. it means a lot.

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