Dave Alan Walker

Gold Star - 4,807 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Predator - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

A man with a borrowed soul
hiding the devil behind his eyes
he sits waiting with a fake smile

He coverts what he knows
he's a creature of habit
don't be fooled by his eyes
and fake smiles

Comments about Predator by Dave Alan Walker

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/16/2013 5:49:00 AM)

    Nice warning to prey. Beware of fake gestures. Thank you for a beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Lyn Paul (8/14/2013 7:34:00 PM)

    Words that are a little haunting. We know these predators are out there but do forget. Thank you for reminding us in a very clever way. (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (8/14/2013 5:50:00 AM)

    Wow..wonderful write.. Well said....We cannot change anyone but we ourselves can change....Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (8/13/2013 2:08:00 PM)

    there are many people such as this i n this world, beware. good poem Dave (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 13, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, August 23, 2013

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