Predestined Paths Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Predestined Paths

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Beyond the persistent thoughts of you,
There is a part of me unaltered;
For this fervent love I feel for you,
It is a mortal one, and falters.

When my soul is in communion with God,
In silence of the moment dwells:
Immortal, pure, eternal Love;
The emanated Light can tell.

Each one of us with its predestined path,
We feel it tangible with The Divine:
We all have a purpose in this life:
I wonder which is mine…

Wednesday, October 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: purpose,destiny,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 19 November 2015

'Beyond the persistent thoughts of you There is a part of me unaltered; For this fervent love I feel for you, It is a mortal one, and falters.' this is the mortal clay when not time fired into sparks of immortality 'When my soul is in communion with God, In silence of the moment dwells; Immortal, pure, eternal love; The emanated Light can tell.' radiant encapsulated in divine bliss 'Each one of us with its predestined path, We feel it tangible with The Divine; We all have a purpose in this life; I wonder: what it’s mine? ' knowing our mind soul, in shades of light to despair adversity, is a solid preparation for our journey you already know I love this poem with kaleidoscopic images turning in mind's eye :)

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Rajesh Thankappan 01 November 2015

Discovering the purpose of our life is in itself a purposeful pursuit. An excellent write.

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M Asim Nehal 18 October 2015

Brilliant writing, yet another thoughtful poem, heartfelt.........lest me speechlesssssssss.beyond ratings..

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