Portrait (Haiku) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Portrait (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


smiling in stillness
while blending each other's thoughts—
immortalising

Portrait (Haiku)
Tuesday, May 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: art,artistic work
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A portrait of mine, painted about 20 years ago by a dear friend and Vatican artist - Claudiu Ungureanu.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 18 May 2016

smiling in stillness, the smiling blending immortalising, inspired a smile of appreciation and a sweet moment of stillness in the mind, with a depth of appreciation in the soul, sold on this portrait :)

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M Asim Nehal 24 May 2016

Awesome.....Magical thoughts blended together in stillness to make immortal art and relation.10++++

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Kelly Kurt 17 May 2016

Although I have come to learn that this is more of a Senryu than a Haiku, its form And content were excellent

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Donnie Wolff 18 May 2016

You are an amazingly talented young lady. With three sentences can bring feeling that has been felt by some. And it makes us some breathe deeply and smile.

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Bharati Nayak 18 May 2016

Wonderful poetic expression!

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Rajesh Thankappan 29 May 2016

Isn't it like capturing the past and presenting it in the present? Beautiful work.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 May 2016

And respecting the muse of life. Thanks for sharing.

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Terry Craddock 24 May 2016

Stillness Spreading Into Paint Strokes smiling in stillness stillness spreading into paint strokes form varnish pigments mix merge morph images echo personality threads time distilled haunts frozen time capsules framed posed portraits Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Portrait' by the poet Mihaela Pirjol. Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.

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Terry Craddock 24 May 2016

An Aged Ageless Pose smiling in stillness smiling blending immortalising into immortality moments shellac lacquer grain depths smile varnished appreciation depths resinous matter poised depths a sweet moment of stillness in fluid flow mind spreading strokes soul sold painted into portraits Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Portrait' by the poet Mihaela Pirjol. Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.

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Terry Craddock 24 May 2016

A Past Painted Portrait smiling in eternal cast stillness smiling blending immortalising poised inspired a smile of appreciation a sweet moment of stillness in solitary mind with a depth of appreciation in the soul eclipses sold on a past painted portrait black framed Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Portrait' by the poet Mihaela Pirjol. Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.

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