Prelude Poem by Tan Pratonix

Prelude

Rating: 5.0


What's my woman?
She is laughter;
She is a cup of wine
That flows for centuries after.

She is a courser through the veins
Bringing on delicious dreams.

She is a green field by a river,
And she will stay as such for ever.

She is SHE,
And what can that be
But the quintessence of
Reality?

Thursday, February 2, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: laughter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 26 February 2006

Enjoyed this very much.Love Duncan

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Gina Onyemaechi 02 February 2006

Sweet but could be enhanced with a more complex imagery, in my view. Kind regards, Gina.

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