Melanie May Poem by Tan Pratonix

Ah! ! ! Such lovely, tender images showing such lovely, tender feeling! ! ! Warm regards (very warm! ! ! that's how I feel inside now after reading this!) , Gina. PS: are you going to show me how to find you in the Forum, or what? Gina.

A lovely little poem with a nice flow to it well done: -))

A poem written beautifully from such tender feelings. You are a true poet by nature.

This is a wonderful poem Tan! Its very beautifully written...simple, sweet superb! Zainab

Nicely done, Tan. You are a fine poet with an abundance of talent. All my best-Faith

A a love lost or perhaps admired from afar.

Very nice Tan, there's a quiet message here, I like it very much. Melvina

this is very nice.you are very good keep it up

Elegant in its simplicity and effortless flow

beautiful just beautiful