Preservation Poem by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Preservation



His job description is to
Protect the cornfeild.
That haunting scarecrow
Takes his duties
All too seriously...
Reasons exist why
Even crows, the birds of death,
Cower before this ominous entity
And quickly fly away
In a terror-filled plight
His cold, merciless button eyes
Pick out anything
Potentially threatening to
His crops.
Cruel destruction ensues and
Becomes their fate.
Human, animal, even creatures
Somewhere in between...
None are exempt from
His twisted justice's reign.
His neck and hands are
Tied to that bleak, wooden post.
That limitation upon him
Is a facade.
A false pretense to lull
Your pitiful mind into
A net of 'safety'.
Carelessly stroll by or
Run through the stalks.
Maybe rest in the road
That cuts through the property.
If you do, enjoy it.
That will be your last
Piece of happiness before
You fall for the final time.
No one has unveiled
What grotesque methods this
Straw-based tormentor uses.
Or the final tomb of
The recently brutalized.
Only ever are bloodstained
Circles found, painted onto
The cold, unmoving ground,
The silent witness of
The horrid acts.
Often mistaken for another
Life form's art, the
Townspeople have no idea
How distant their theories
Are from reality.
And how eerily similar
It is to the truth.
Ignorance dominates the
Quiet, rural area.
If only they knew
The true price of
Preserving a little
Sustenance...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thyris Taylor 28 June 2012

I liked this poem but it lacks depth about scare crows. Like for example comparing a scarecrow to a mercernary, or to police who may be hampered in their protection of citizens by laws such as the miranda, because the scare scrow is tied to a post, or crows to criminals or theives in genenral. It reads more like a very good short story instead of poetery. Hope this makes sense.

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John Raubenheimer 10 May 2012

I like this story of the scarecrow who is far more of a menace than he seems. The only thing left to do, in my opinion, is to shape the poem more, cut out dross and unnecessary words.

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