I keep
Diving deeper
And deeper...
To avoid
Facing the
Problems on
The surface...
But the
Further I
Go, the
Faster they
Follow me...
I thought
It was
Done,
That it
Had been
The end...
But it
Seems I
Have only
Opened the
Door
And it's
Only the
Beginning
This is amazing! The title captures interest, the format is appropriate, and the poem is so true. Nice job! :)
Amazing. This is a lot like my poem The Edge is near. Feeling like your falling and lost without help is a hard thing to deal with but it will pass and you have to approach it and stop it.
(Keep Avoidence to Violence The best way to get peace) A good poem! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Brings to mind- The furthur you tunnel away from your problems, the deeper they'll bury you. Good poem. Straight forward. Never shy away from your humility.