Primum Non Nocere (A Senryu) Poem by Seamus O' Brian

Primum Non Nocere (A Senryu)



Tragic at the worst,
In one's construction of verse
The rhyme that is firced.

Tuesday, September 27, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: writing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 27 September 2016

I did not know what it meant- -I googled it. Google and I are such good buds. Yes, forcing [or fircing] a rhyme is like cheating on a test, but when the Devil is driving........... ;) Quite frankly I hesitate to vote cuz 5 cuz 5 may really mean 5 out of 10 instead of 5 out of 5- -you can see my quandary.... I don't want to be firced into doing harm... ;) I'll make a note to come back in a few days and use the highest score available....

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Seamus O Brian 27 September 2016

LOL, Susan, you truly made me laugh. Sometimes it does feel like the Devil is driving. Don't worry about the voting thing either, I seem to have discovered that I can vote for my own pieces.

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