All PH love poems
make my eyes recall
the first one I loved
but cold never touch
so much of
''hull chall
dill rehta tha mucchul
abh kaya kahein hum
but saath saath chull''
those days have lapsed
sadly could not hold her hand
she kissed my teary eyes
then flew away
like an unchallenged butterfly
oh how I loved her
but so many
came and went
heaven sent
but none had the kind of scent
my first love did send
times now since been spent
The first two lines of this poem are the same as those of mine, under the same title. Hoped to find a mention of my name or my poem's, somewhere!
sorry I JUST LIKED THE LINES SHALL AMEND OR ADD ON AS SOON AS I GET A HOLD OF THIS NEW VERSION ELSE SHALL REMOVE IT
Pahle pyaar ki maiñ ye nishani liye phirta huñ/ Khoon e jigar meiñ jumbish o khoob ru ki ravaani liye phirta huñ|
Āshiqi sabr-talab aur tamannah betāb/dil ka kya maiñ rang karuñ Khoon-e-jigar hote tak(Ghalib)
No love is as overwhelming and as pristine as the maiden love of a lass I say THESE LINES R HONOURED BYKHAIRUL HASSAN ERROR OVERLOOKED PL GIVE CREDIT TO HIM THANKS
............ALREADY INCLUDED IN YOUR POEM COMMENTS PL SEE THANKS...No love is as overwhelming and as pristine, As the maiden love of a lass, say of your poem makes my eyes recall the first one i loved but cold never touch so much of hull chall dillrehta tha mucchul abh kaya hahein hum
ALREADY INCLUDED IN YOUR POEM COMMENTS PL SEE THANKS...No love is as overwhelming and as pristine, As the maiden love of a lass, say of your poem makes my eyes recall the first one i loved but cold never touch so much of hull chall dillrehta tha mucchul abh kaya hahein hum
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yes dil rehta tha mucchul... that's kind of feel one has in first love after that it is just fun.beautifully penned the furst love and its indwelling scent and that will never be forgotten. Blessed are those whonreally live with their first love.