Promise Poem by Jasmeen Kaur

Promise

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I love your smile because it lightens up my world,
I love your eyes because of the love they hold,
I love your nose because that's the most beautiful thing I've ever seen,
I love your lips because they take me where no one has ever been,
But most of all
I love your soul for it's the purest of all.

My world today, has turned upside down,
Instead of the smile you love, I sit with a frown,
I am suffering, I am in pain but I cannot scream,
For screaming will take me further away from my dream,
I want to do something, at least put up a fight,
My hands are tied and my mouth shut tight,
Defeated I sit, but now with a grin,
For no one can defeat the fire within.

Time will change; people will come and go,
We too shall keep going with the flow,
There are things that I will forget,
But not the sound of your heartbeat, I bet,
That sound of my name in your voice,
I can recognize it even in the noise,
I will grow old and frail,
But my love for you shall prevail,
I believe in love, I believe in you,
I will always hold on to that because you love me too.

One day, we'll be sitting together,
White haired and wrinkled, perhaps talking about kids and the trend,
There is so much more to come, this is not the end.
I PROMISE this is not the end.

Saturday, December 2, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 02 December 2017

Beautiful passionate piece of poetry nicely penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing Jasmeen.

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Desi Boy 15 December 2017

wonderfull dear I really like ur lines. plzzz send ur lyrics (rap) me in inbox I am trying to rap ur lyrics.

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Jazib Kamalvi 03 December 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Jasmeee K. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Jasmeen Kaur 03 December 2017

Thank you very much for appreciating.

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pooja 03 December 2017

amazing babe ,,, heart touching

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Jasmeen Kaur 03 December 2017

thanku girl

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Rishi 03 December 2017

way to go girl... :

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Jasmeen Kaur 03 December 2017

thank you :)

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Rajnish Manga 02 December 2017

Welcome to this august Forum, Jasmeen. And mow a word about this poem. You have nicely captured the sensuous and the emotional aspects of a relationship in love. Thanks for sharing this poem. I quote: But most of all.... I love your soul for it's the purest of all. Defeated I sit, but now with a grin, For no one can defeat the fire within.

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Jasmeen Kaur 03 December 2017

thank you very much for your kind words. I tried my best to put into words what was going on in my heart.

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