Promise Me You'll Remember Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Promise Me You'll Remember

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As truth true to thee
O thou poet,
Ready am I
To take a bet:

Thou art braver
Than ye might believe,
And stronger
Than impression ye give;
Smarter much more
Than ye think,
Thou canst sure write
Better than ye ink;
Never hold thyself down,
Thou art here to wear crown.
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Reflections | 25.01.2020 |
Topic: poet, belief, truth

Saturday, February 1, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: belief,poet,truth
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
These are simply four couplets here following anapaest meter; split for the modernists that like it in this form.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 February 2020

Wow, I love this beautifully crafted write. Powerful and very inspiring. A well composed couplets. On to my Poem List.

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 February 2020

Thanks dear poet, your large and liberal heart shows here. As to the note in my poem, one has to bow to the spirit of the time, the zeitgeist, as they say. And I'm learning to do it the hard way, still not totally reconciled, the inflexible bone that i am.

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Unica Hija 01 February 2020

Very inspiring piece sir A.. It truly uplifted my spirit after reading. Thank you for making me smile again

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 February 2020

Yes, it is with a smile that one can take that extra mile. Thanks.

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Anjandev Roy 01 February 2020

to wear crown.......great write. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 February 2020

Yes, if not for all that we write, we deserve a crown at least for a few poems. And that means, we have it within, Often in chasing quantity we sacrifice quality. Thanks dear poet for your appreciation, but even this piece can be better.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 February 2020

Never ever hold yourself down! ! Dreams! Never give up. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 February 2020

What a lovely take out! Dreams! Never give up. Thanks dear poet.

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Aniruddha Pathak

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Godhra - Gujarat
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