Tuesday, August 15, 2006

Proposal Comments

Rating: 5.0

A dainty crow writes a long letter
to a white duck.
My dear, I am really fed up with my lifestyle.
Everyday I have to fly here & there for my daily bread.
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COMMENTS
Emma Johnson 16 August 2006

CUTE and a piece of brilliance. Susie.

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Joseph Daly 16 August 2006

This is a wonderful piece Nimal. A morality tale in verse. The flow of it is beautiful and I like that there is no hectoring tone to it.

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Patricia Gale 16 August 2006

A splendid read, fairy tale type with a meaning, well done!

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Sandra Fowler 16 August 2006

A warm and enchanting little fairy tale. In such a storybook world even crows and ducks live happily ever after. Very charming, Nimal. Sandra

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Linda Ori 16 August 2006

I think you speak of a larger picture than crow and duck here, Nimal. Interesting slant to this message, slick and nice use of imagery. I like this one very much! Linda

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Preeti - is here! 16 August 2006

Cuteee Proposal! Preets PS - I liked black and white duckling line!

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nimal dunuhinga

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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