Marvin Brato Sr

Freshman - 966 Points (March 2,1960 / Davao City, Philippines)

((((Proud Father)) - Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

My son, at your birth
You are like a jewel
Instills an innate mirth
An aura ringing a bell

My son, as a kid
You are creative
As you always did
Arts quite perceptive

My son, as adolescent
You act as regular lad
With a mature ascent
Make me feels glad

My son, as you now stride
On this graduation installs
A gained triumphant pride
Flowing in me like waterfalls

Comments about ((((Proud Father)) by Marvin Brato Sr

  • (3/31/2009 1:22:00 AM)

    congratulations to you both.............made each other proud.....wellpenned (Report) Reply

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  • (3/23/2009 10:51:00 PM)

    I do like the way you describe the flowing of your feeling - like a waterfall.
    This is a wonderful tribute to your son.
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  • (3/21/2009 4:21:00 AM)

    Beautiful flowing poetry for a much adored son...thanks for sharing this Marvin...10+++ (Report) Reply

  • (3/21/2009 3:01:00 AM)

    An ecstatic tribute to a dearly loved son - from birth to graduation. The reader can truly feel the 'pride flowing in you like waterfalls'. Congratulations Marvin. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 21, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 17, 2011

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