Puny Is A Kite Poem by kite remedy

Puny Is A Kite

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as a single little kite flies,
so peace and lonely is how i desire a life.
yet there's a question so tentative awaits to be answered,
'where's the sky so beautiful so long i've treasured? '
i've been longing a place where i only perceive
the clouds a kite wants to perceive
and where I only hear
birds' chirping as a kite wants to hear.
so small is a dream,
so puny it is.
yet beautiful as it is,
like as brilliant as a dream could be.
and a single kite does fly
and fly
to a heaven above this earth
beyond forests and deserts..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sid John Gardner. 12 December 2008

A kite is a spiritual entity in itself.The kite flies independently.Borne on the wind and soars above the earth with all its troubles.Watch a group of children as they in turn watch a kite as it soars...What do we see? ... Smiles upon their faces...Would that we could ALL be kite flyers. Respect, Sid.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 06 December 2008

All I want is a life quiet devoid of quarrels and fights devoid of dark ignorance's night Is it a big deal no no, I feel Good Ideas

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Naru Kaede 04 December 2008

This is a very great poem, , Everybody always want peace, they all want to live in the way of kite, But the wind not always be kind, and the string can't be always hold kite, This is a beautiful one! Love it, Naru Kaede

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very nice beat it flows very well.. Good piece Krista

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