Pure, White Cloud Poem by Uriah Hamilton

Pure, White Cloud

Rating: 4.8


Excuse me, please,
I need to drift
To a more auspicious place
Where my time-weary face
Will not appear so gloomy.

I’m a pure, white cloud
Seeking blue skies
To celebrate and venerate
Instead of participating
In storms I did not create.

Tell Elizabeth
I’ll meet her
Where the monks keep
The holy relics,
I need to be
In the good graces of holiness
When the fires of perdition bloom
Like daisies on a green hill.

There is still something special
Within my soul
That I must not allow
The treacherous to kill.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 06 October 2018

There is still something special Within my soul That I must not allow The treacherous to kill. - - - yes! let us each guard our souls and keep them, as innocent as possible

0 0 Reply
Sandra Fowler 31 October 2007

Your poetic picture is painted on that pure white cloud. Very touching, Uriah. Warmest regards, Sandra

0 0 Reply
Alison Cassidy 27 October 2007

This is a distinctly enigmatic piece Uriah, written with your usual skill and poetic finesse. A conflict between the higher and lower self, perhaps? Love the cloud metaphor. Warmly, Allie xxxx

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success