LaSoaphia QuXazs

Freshman - 797 Points (1934 / Budapest, Hungary, living in the USA)

Purpose. - Poem by LaSoaphia QuXazs

We need purpose, but what do we attract?
Parents take care of their children or vice versa, they react,
Man work in their jobs, many woman do the housework,
Unless ambition hits them both to became a jerk.

Some do too much; end up with a stroke,
Some become lazy bums and become a joke.
Some become a control freak to make others serve,
Certainly in no time they become invalid, what they deserve.

Mankind was created for moving forward,
Move their bodies; sharpen their brains for their own reward.
What we sow we definitely will reap in time
Look back what we did and analyze the grime.

Good or bad, all came out of our doing,
Consciously watch out where you are going.
Regretting your bad move might give you a cancer,
Learn from your mistakes, trust in goodness, be an achiever.

Until we are here on Earth we will never be perfect,
We can just do one thing; listen to the heart where it direct.
With faith in goodness and know that everything works for good,
Have strength, fairness, kindness and enthusiasm,
So, you would never be misunderstood.


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Comments about Purpose. by LaSoaphia QuXazs

  • (5/31/2012 7:30:00 PM)


    THAT IS A VERY GOOD POEM,
    Certainly speaks about general law applicable to all,
    one has to be what he has to be!
    If fate is everything, then there is no free will,
    Only slogan we have is

    Win yourself, then you need not think about the world, it is already at your feet!
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  • (5/27/2012 4:12:00 PM)


    We all have a path to follow, it's if we pick the right one, a great poem. (Report) Reply

  • (5/27/2012 12:57:00 PM)


    live your life... walk your path, and do the work that is yours to do! great thoughts. (Report) Reply

  • (5/25/2012 9:44:00 AM)


    Real truths - one foot in front of the other and keep walking (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 25, 2012



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