' Quadrangular Friendship ' Poem by Surayya Abbas

' Quadrangular Friendship '

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Hope is my best friend
Once it said to me that
'If you celebrate my arrival
I would stay with you
As long as you live'

Truth is my best belief
Once it told me that
'I won't leave you
If you ensure me
Your deeds '

Trust is my best mate
Once it whispered in my ears that
'I won't go anywhere
If you believe
In purity'.

Thursday, July 30, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: trust
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arwen Lee CW 27 March 2010

Hope, truth & trust - those are things & values we shall cherish but getting further and further away from us-because we no longer open up our heart to them. Thanks to you Surayya, I will do my best to embrace them.... :)

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Sameer Ahmed 01 August 2009

Purity and tenderness of your heart is evidant from these spectacular verses. The simplicity is what is unique in this poem with a mystery of the fourth concerned person which is of course the poetess herself. A nice way to elaborate the friendship with things other than humans that maintain the dignity of a true person....

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yes u speak of truth.

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