Surayya Abbas


I Can'T Stop..... - Poem by Surayya Abbas

I can't stop
The sunlight
Peeping through the window
Of my bedside.
I can't stop
The rain
When it starts
To drain all my pain.
I can't stop
The tears
Of someone
Shivering with fears.
I can't stop
The amusing style
Of children
When they give smiles.
I can't stop
The dried leaves
Falling from the trees.
I can't stop
The brightness of
Moonlight
In lonely nights.
I can't stop
The sights
Waving in my eyes.
I can't stop
Myself
When it comes to write a poem.





4/8/2009


Comments about I Can'T Stop..... by Surayya Abbas

  • (7/1/2009 3:04:00 PM)

    gread job dear. wonderful poem, beautifully written.10++ (Report)Reply

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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (6/1/2009 2:33:00 PM)

    'I can't stop
    Myself
    When it comes to write a poem.'

    A lovely poem that flows like a cool river.
    And finally you have concluded nicely.
    10+++
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  • (5/29/2009 11:31:00 PM)

    yeah very true... the things related to nature can't be stop or changed... but being a poet when you see, you feel and bring into vreses as you said..wonderful poem and enjoyed a lot... hope you never stop writing... I am a peace wisher poet with 6 books published and soon the 7th one on my thoughts will be published in Canada by my poetry friends... any way this poem got 10 +++ points (Report)Reply

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  • Saadat Tahir (4/19/2009 5:58:00 AM)

    very nice poem
    thanx
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  • (4/19/2009 3:20:00 AM)

    finely done my friend.. great works u are amazing (Report)Reply

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  • (4/18/2009 6:09:00 AM)

    It is death........ that can stop all this! ! ! ! ! ! !

    when we are alive! ! ! ! ! we can't stop
    soft and clear and poetic flow too
    superb! !
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  • (4/14/2009 1:49:00 AM)

    Don't stop writing poetry, everything changes given time except our ability to be creative, you do it so beautifully so please don't stop. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/10/2009 6:46:00 AM)

    Yes, One can't stop
    and as a matter of fact
    can't start writing as well
    It comes by itself

    Beautiful flow
    10
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  • (4/9/2009 5:03:00 PM)

    Very nicely written. I hope you will not stop writing poems
    for the rest of your life. Take care.

    Kind regrads,

    Sandra
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  • Saadat Tahir (4/8/2009 2:48:00 PM)

    simple ideas put in a beautiful string of words...liked it
    great job...keep penning
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  • (4/8/2009 2:39:00 PM)

    A poem seems to have a streamline flow in its lines which are nicely penned in words....The idealogy of consistency looks apparent through the essence of the poem and it depicts the diversity of your thoughts that seems to have no limit when it comes to write something on paper........10/10

    Best Wishes
    Sameer
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 8, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, May 1, 2009


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