I Can'T Stop..... Poem by Surayya Abbas

I Can'T Stop.....

Rating: 4.5


I can't stop
The sunlight
Peeping through the window
Of my bedside.
I can't stop
The rain
When it starts
To drain all my pain.
I can't stop
The tears
Of someone
Shivering with fears.
I can't stop
The amusing style
Of children
When they give smiles.
I can't stop
The dried leaves
Falling from the trees.
I can't stop
The brightness of
Moonlight
In lonely nights.
I can't stop
The sights
Waving in my eyes.
I can't stop
Myself
When it comes to write a poem.





4/8/2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sameer Ahmed 08 April 2009

A poem seems to have a streamline flow in its lines which are nicely penned in words....The idealogy of consistency looks apparent through the essence of the poem and it depicts the diversity of your thoughts that seems to have no limit when it comes to write something on paper........10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

0 0 Reply
Saadat Tahir 08 April 2009

simple ideas put in a beautiful string of words...liked it great job...keep penning

0 0 Reply
Sandra Fowler 09 April 2009

Very nicely written. I hope you will not stop writing poems for the rest of your life. Take care. Kind regrads, Sandra

0 0 Reply
ata khan 10 April 2009

Yes, One can't stop and as a matter of fact can't start writing as well It comes by itself Beautiful flow 10

0 0 Reply
Bob Blackwell 14 April 2009

Don't stop writing poetry, everything changes given time except our ability to be creative, you do it so beautifully so please don't stop.

0 0 Reply
Reihaneh Jalalian 01 July 2009

gread job dear. wonderful poem, beautifully written.10++

0 0 Reply
Ashraful Musaddeq 01 June 2009

'I can't stop Myself When it comes to write a poem.' A lovely poem that flows like a cool river. And finally you have concluded nicely. 10+++

0 0 Reply
Afzal Shauq 29 May 2009

yeah very true... the things related to nature can't be stop or changed... but being a poet when you see, you feel and bring into vreses as you said..wonderful poem and enjoyed a lot... hope you never stop writing... I am a peace wisher poet with 6 books published and soon the 7th one on my thoughts will be published in Canada by my poetry friends... any way this poem got 10 +++ points

0 0 Reply
Saadat Tahir 19 April 2009

very nice poem thanx

0 0 Reply
Mel Vincent Basconcillo 19 April 2009

finely done my friend.. great works u are amazing

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success