Louis Borgo

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Queen Of Heaven (Message In A Bottle) - Poem by Louis Borgo

If the twelve of night was a castle of light's,
this be the latern,
to bless tommorow's light,
Sight be the reason why you sparke this night. (till dust till dawn)

My beloved,
stars and symmmetry match this equation perfectionly,
if only you could imagine.

that in fact,
there is no closure to a distance when it come to you and i.
you point and i retrack,
because peddles of a foot step last for days,
when it rains notice the weather,
needless to say continue less to say.
because forever is not never,
just quick to say.

Like a zoteact our eyes meet,
you are my queen of heven,
even if we sharing the same star through out history it lies,
I write this message in a bottle to cross the most deepest cries against times.

Cause if you read what im saying,
hell would be unfamailar to the most deepest fan.
when waves come through.
I sit and build you brand new castle walls throught and new.
could you imagine that in good time and faith,
waiting patienly in this storm could forecast the weather.

Just a note in a bottle sailing away.....

to a house by the lake,
with the most luxury fabric,
it found it's way.

softness and crumpness of a cofee cake made for taste of coffe,
set's beside her,
i wonder if she will read it?
the shadowness and emptyness to captive,
show's remorsh to fashion,
heart warming,
just words to a paper.

Just to quiet the storm,
i let my pen reap the labor of my harvest,

message in a bottle my Queen of heaven,
what second become of hours,
waitiing patiently.....

i just called it the 'long count period'

Comments about Queen Of Heaven (Message In A Bottle) by Louis Borgo

  • Rachel Ann Butler (8/20/2015 4:31:00 PM)

    Good imagery. The poem gave a full message (Report)Reply

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  • Afshan Fatima (7/1/2015 1:04:00 AM)

    Beautiful imagerY (Report)Reply

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  • Roseann Shawiak (9/12/2014 4:36:00 PM)

    Louis, this is a beautiful poem, full of vivid imagery. There is no closure to a distance when it comes to you and I. Absolutely love that line, it resonates within my heart. Because forever is not never - is another beautiful sentiment you have portrayed and it sits within my mind. Heart warming, just words to a paper also touches and embraces my mind as a poet. Fantastic poem, I give you a 10. Thank you so much for your comment on my poem: Soundless Emptiness, I totally appreciate it. RoseAnn (Report)Reply

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  • Mohammad Akmal Nazir (7/16/2011 1:12:00 PM)

    Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.
    Warmest regards

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 16, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, October 11, 2013

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