Queen Of Victory Poem by Eindaray Kyaw

Queen Of Victory

Rating: 4.2


Along the bank of my weakness
Wandering for years, aimless
The more I walk and run
The more I trample future sand!

Whenever I lie on the grass
Near are my friends, lazy Dust
The more I sleep and dream
The more they steel my queen!

What is the beauty of my queen?
Where does she sing?
A charming song wakes me up
I long for smooching her neck!

She is dancing on the other bank
And waving her hands without any stress
How can I swim to her?
No boat is ready as my car!

Can you guide me, dear fireflies?
Can you dry the stream, dear Paradigm?
No uncertain help is welcome
Just wait how I will go that land! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 23 September 2012

Very beautiful writing. Thank you Eindaray

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Aung Si 13 September 2012

Good! No uncertain help is welcome Just wait how I will go that land OK, Just waiting is enough.I'll give u unhelpful and uncertain help.Just kidding! ! !

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 13 September 2012

The time will bring good news and good things for sure. The Queen here is great to be used. it gives a nice meaning to the poem. you are so talented and great in your work well done.

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So Close 12 September 2012

superb lines....! ! i felt some kind of different feel when i read it....keep writing... »so close«

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