Eindaray Kyaw

Rookie (8th Sep,1996 / Yangon)

She - Poem by Eindaray Kyaw

Not for money, but for country
A shoulder to cry on for poor, hungry
Appreciate her deepest sympathy!

Not for pride, but for survive
A sky to depend on for unsafe lives
No doubt her wonderful might!

Not for high scores, but for free snows
An arrow to hold on for thee zeros
With plenty of strings to her bow!

Not for influence, but for development
A bullet to get on for future-blacked
Take her words for golden luck!

Not for popularity, but for humanity
An oasis to rely on for thirsties
Welcome her energetic activity! !

Poet's Notes about The Poem

'SHE' in this poem refers to Daw Aung San Su Kyi, the winner of Noble Peace Prize from Myanmar!

Comments about She by Eindaray Kyaw

  • (9/12/2012 5:04:00 PM)

    very interesting piece (Report) Reply

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  • (9/6/2012 8:49:00 AM)

    A nice triplet poem in honour of Daw Aung San Su Kyi sis. Cheers! (Report) Reply

  • Sina Farajzadeh (9/3/2012 12:39:00 PM)

    Well, I like the way you honor your compatriot. You are about 6 years younger than me but I see talent in your writing. I like the first stanza of your poem dear. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • John Brown (9/3/2012 9:49:00 AM)

    Most people have heard of Aung San Su Kyi, and as far as I can see she seems a wonderful, caring person. Your poem about her is very good, though it can't be easy writing in a language other than your own. Having said that, your meaning is perfectly clear. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • 1. Floy Dy Ra Floyd Floydson (9/1/2012 2:53:00 AM)

    I appreciate very much to honor a woman like Aung San Su Kyi, the true leader of Myanmar.
    Thanks for your lovely poem. By the way I did some lyrics for a song dedicated to her called Together Only Love on 2010/09/23. Please take a look and share with friends if you like: =) : =) : =)
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  • Mark Dillon (8/30/2012 7:53:00 AM)

    Unfortunately I had no knowledge of this woman, but through your tribute to her I CAN SEE SHE WAS A TRUELY GREAT WOMAN, freat write and thank you for sharing with us all here. (Report) Reply

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. (8/29/2012 12:10:00 PM)

    First of all, thank you for sharing this art. well, the poem is so good and i enjoy reading this work. i hope to read poems like this in the future.
    well done.
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  • Unwritten Soul (8/29/2012 11:05:00 AM)

    Thanks for Inviting for this write, i feel so honored to give my personal view about she- Aung San Su Kyyi...
    You dont have to explain me much about her because everyone i bet know her very well...I am truly happy for the truth that finally find it way to stand, she is an icon of victory and love of humanity...All of her work never less than a bless for people, i wish her the best and your poem deliver in such great way...a beautiful gift for her, if she can read this... :) _Unwritten Soul
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  • Valerie Dohren (8/29/2012 9:17:00 AM)

    Great write and a wonderful tribute to this lady. (Report) Reply

  • Z.i. Mahmud (8/29/2012 9:07:00 AM)

    Great! A Brave Politician and democratic leader! She is to be appreciated! (Report) Reply

  • Aung Si (8/29/2012 2:14:00 AM)

    Great! Your style and meaning are powerful.You can compose her spirit to store in my heart.Thanks for sharing this. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 28, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, August 31, 2012

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