Quickie-Not Quite Right Poem by Loke Kok yee

Quickie-Not Quite Right



I'm not sure if I am getting it right
But it will help if you just hold on tight
Stop roaring; else you put me in fright
And unable with you to unite

Quickie-Not Quite Right
Friday, April 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: humour
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 26 April 2018

Dear poet, probably you like Bri much! Anyway, you are so funny!

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Loke Kok Yee 28 April 2018

Thank you Dr, Bri has a great sense of humour, and I expect him to put me in my place if he feels otherwise.

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Kelly Kurt 20 April 2018

Monkey business : -)

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Loke Kok Yee 23 April 2018

I was made to understand that such activities are not restricted to monkeys. Thanks Kelly

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Valsa George 20 April 2018

This is very explicit.......! ! They should have at least moved to a cover!

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Loke Kok Yee 23 April 2018

Thanks Valsa, perhaps I should have put a screen across it, but then Bri might be disappointed. Ho! Ho!

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