Loke Kok yee

Quickie-Smoking And Drinking - Poem by Loke Kok yee

Smoking will make you a high risk case
The effects are seen all over your face
If you smoke and drink at a fast pace
You’ll be a forerunner in the death race

Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle

Comments about Quickie-Smoking And Drinking by Loke Kok yee

  • Sanjukta Nag (11/3/2015 6:07:00 AM)

    Absolutely.. and you have said it wonderfully through our poem and that well chosen picture. (Report) Reply

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  • Valsa George (11/3/2015 1:28:00 AM)

    Quite right! A grave warning to chain smokers and addictive drunkards! (Report) Reply

  • Melvina Germain (11/2/2015 8:06:00 AM)

    Where did you find that picture, like most smokers, I don't think he cares...You keep me smiling first thing in the morning Loke Kok Yee..... (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (11/2/2015 7:21:00 AM)

    Very nice. A poem with a message through humour. Lovely write. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (11/2/2015 6:54:00 AM)

    I sure like this one.
    Cute and very wise.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 2, 2015

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