Quickie-Retiree Poem by Loke Kok yee

Quickie-Retiree

Rating: 5.0


Whoopee! ! I am now a retiree
No more stress and no more worries
Just lay back and write crappy poetry
Plenty of time to develop my tummy

Quickie-Retiree
Saturday, October 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 01 September 2016

it must have been slippery work holding the frog down by its feet! so you think retirement has no stress? well, stresses are different, i confess. to get up and go to work, ONE used to be, but now JUST getting up can be....misery! as for developing a gigantic tummy, it's hard not to when things are yummy, you've moved from a bothersome house, and curled up in an apartment like a mouse, no lawn to mow, no house exterior to paint, no mile walk to work (each way) , no................... ................................ ice cream break. the heck with the poem! I'm RETIRED! ! ! ! bri ;)

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Simone Inez Harriman 16 November 2015

Just what I'm looking forward to, Loke. Watch this space...lol. Your poem made me smile....10

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Hans Vr 02 November 2015

I like the quickie style of your poems. they have something fun and a nice message

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Melvina Germain 18 October 2015

Well now, so true some do sit back and get fat, ought to take up walking eh...Love this but must say that often the stress becomes worse in old age.

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M Asim Nehal 17 October 2015

Ha ha ha.....Just relax and cool down from work not from life....Good one..

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