Quiet Melancholy Poem by Khairul Ahsan
Quiet Melancholy
A time comes at the end of the day
To stand alone and look distant,
Stretching out the sight far away
And look for serenity at that instant;
To say goodbye to the day that draws to a close
As beneath the horizon the yolk like sun goes.
Dhaka
20 July 2019
@Bernard F. Asuncion, Thank you very much for reading and appreciating my poem. Much inspired.
Wow great creative thinking how you compared the sun to a yolk! ! Sundown is a quiet moment to meditate, pray and contemplate as it is the end of a day and can be compared to life lonely moments. Very poetic how your poem conveys the feel. Kudos. Pls pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too titled, " The Hajj pilgrimage "
Beautifully penned. " The yolk like sun goes" Perfect. Lovely picture.
@Lyn Paul, thank you very much for appreciating the metaphor, the picture and the poem. Much inspired.
Thank you, @Lyn Paul, for appreciating the metaphor and the picture. Much inspired.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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