" Your Eyes" .. Said He Poem by Indira Renganathan

" Your Eyes" .. Said He

Rating: 5.0


'Your eyes' said he 'are two fish that play
In the sweet ocean of my deep love'
'Thanks' said she..'hope sweet ocean of love
Turns not brine to out pour from my eyes'

Monday, July 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love,social
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 16 July 2018

Your Eyes is a sweet little poem! Loved reading it! Thanks dear madam for sharing.......10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 July 2018

In the sweet ocean of deep love, eyes wonderfully reflect vision of sweetness and caring. Turning the page once again love revives trust. This amazing poem attracts attention for revisiting this.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 July 2018

lovely reply fish are not reliable and brine is oceanery so kick such guys maybe who tell lies..ma'am did you not read my two poems MOMS SMILES AND MOTHERS DAY TO DAY AS A MOM LIKE THEM YOU MAY HELP ME TRANSLATE THEM IN YOUR LANGUAGE MANY HAVE THANKS IN ADVANCE

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Robert Murray Smith 16 July 2018

The eyes say it all. Nice poem.++10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 July 2018

A beautiful metaphorical poem on eyes and love has been astutely and incisively delineated. Thank u dear madam for sharing this gem.10

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Rini shibu 16 July 2018

Beautiful poem about eyes and tears

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