Rain [2] Poem by Gert Strydom

Rain [2]

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The rain was suddenly pouring down
in the late afternoon
a thing that we used to call
civil service weather
when everybody was going home

Just two thunder claps was followed
by a torrent of rain
and red roses was blown against the window
looking almost like a painting
with the drops running down in little rivulets

and I was dry inside, cordoned off by windows
and a door, being separate from those outside
who was running past in the street
trying to find some shelter.

Thursday, August 3, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: rain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 03 August 2017

An extremely pleasant portrayal of the scene created by a downpour in the late afternoon. Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Gert Strydom

Gert Strydom

Johannesburg, South Africa
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