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Rating: 4.7


still i do remember those nursery days
asking the postman passing by my home
do I have any letter please in my name?
he turns his face, my heart rejoices
like peacock dancing to clouds of hope.....

if he runs straight ignoring saddened voice of quest
my pain reverberates by his feeble rejoinder of negation
heart knows its resonance by emptiness of soul
redolence seems to fear of lone uncanny utterance
rill reels through blood by deep silence of sun setting

whom should i ask rune of sorrow when reneged
light when slowly settles in rucks of darkness
earth apprehends of falling snow losing warmth
do we ever know beats of riffling heart beneath quest?
as wrinkles engulf portrayal of art by rain of tears

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Tears tell tales that words can never wisper. Wondefully written my friend.10/10 from me.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 29 November 2009

From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 29 November 2009

From : Ema B (sydney Australia; Female; 13) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 11/29/2009 3: 31: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Dear fellow poet your poems were wonderful you are very talented I enjoyed reading your other poems to. I look up to you. Thank you.

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Sandra Fowler 28 November 2009

Those who understand tears also understand how to write significant poetry. A beautiful elegy to the power of memory. I loved the days of stamps and aeorgrammes as well.10/10. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Steve Wilkeson 16 November 2009

verses are well written and the message is perfect...... 10

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 05 March 2010

A beautiful poem of an experience that's indelible in a child's little mind: being disappointed by someone he love or expecting something and not getting it from someone loved. A poem that's well written-as usual. a 10

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Sandra Dodd 28 January 2010

Wow! You awakend in me a memory. When I was 4 my grandfather sent me a letter. Since I could not quite read yet, he drew the words in pictures. Everyday after that, for quite a while, I would stand under the post box waiting for the mailman. I did not know a letter was rare and needed to be answered. There is a lot to this poem. Thankyou!

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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 23 January 2010

your poem moistened my eyes with rain of tears. u r excellent in giving vent to tragic emotions. Carry on brother

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Dr.subhendu Kar 10 January 2010

From : Harold K Schreiberg (London/ Orleans United Kingdom; Male; 47) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 1/10/2010 4: 18: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Good morning, dear poet friend, Thank you for your kind wishes I am sorry I haven't been able to answer more quickly but the PoemHunter site would not open! Your poems are full of striking images & rhythm, an excellent job !

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Dr.subhendu Kar 10 January 2010

From : Harold K Schreiberg (London/ Orleans United Kingdom; Male; 47) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 1/10/2010 4: 18: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: hello, Good morning, dear poet friend, Thank you for your kind wishes I am sorry I haven't been able to answer more quickly but the PoemHunter site would not open! Your poems are full of striking images & rhythm, an excellent job !

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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