Anthony Han

Rookie - 7 Points (April 19th 1992 til infinity. / Monterey Park. Raised in H.H.)

Rain On My Soul - Poem by Anthony Han

Rain on my soul
Time fluidly flows
Stress in the mind melting
Precipitating events unclear to the naked eye
Recessing into the atmosphere
Sounds peculiar to a glimpse of heaven

Crying for the earths soft touch
Skies leaked across hugging her face
Keeping the surface from drying out
Replenishing the beauty of each green strand
Blessed in the dark of it all
I remain observing the precious day

As the crisp mist dissipates
Leaving my warm breath in place
The air tickles my lungs anew
Counting each drip of rain
Astonished for each newborn ripple
Only to see another like me

In the distant reflections
Of the many tear shaped drops
How few hours remain
Before the shining sun arises
Fresh puddles reflecting the mood
If Mother Nature was a painter

This would be an fraction of her canvas
Children run across the pools
Splashing delightful new days to be remembered
Cars slick past with their wipers off
Just in moments the picture has shifted
A different type of hype

Refreshing vibes felt amongst these sunny side hills
Grass awoken from the drought
Soil carrying water to the creatures below
Deep as they may be this feeling is deeper
Such beauty captured in my eyes
Finishing this scenery

Birds chirp off the wetness
Critters of all sorts come into the open
Accepting the rays of life
Here today I witnessed the busiest of times
I stand with pride to be a part of it
Over there the significant other arrives

Does this day get any better
The line between two pieces
Inclined when the storm passes
United together until time do us apart
Rain on my soul


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I had grown tired of coming up endless depressing tones on my writes. So I decided it was time to finally try my hand again at one about nature. I thought back to my elementary school days and through out life, how fun the rain was and what it meant to me at those times. Then adding to the end was inspired by a slight attraction to a girl I had met around the time.

Comments about Rain On My Soul by Anthony Han

  • Romeo Della Valle (7/13/2012 11:31:00 PM)


    Excellent! A reservoir of powerful words and rich imagery! Deep and well crafted, I love it! This thought provoking write clearly shows great poetic talent! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! (Report) Reply

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  • (12/13/2011 2:51:00 AM)


    Very, very nice, One sail! ! ! ! <>< (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 12, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 8, 2012


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