Eternal Love Poem by Anthony Han

Eternal Love

Rating: 5.0


I have come to the mark of my set time
Where I shall die and what awaits I do not know
I will darken the light around me, in a fit of animosity
Emerge the same, shining past the wrongs I have started
Tonight I'm burning in hell and it's all so well

The only thing I want is to hold you in my arms one last time
And in this flaming abyss the sparks kissing me don't feel the same
They don't feel like your gentle lips, instead they scar my face
My grief wishes to end this
My lust for your touch still vibrates through me

As long as I possess hope
I will find my way back to you as I once were
This inferno prison will not win over my heart
For the passion inside of mine burns greater

At least for now that is how I feel
At least for now I can bear the devils
They and the lords of this realm
Are all that stand in between us

Let our love grace my escape
As I need it more than ever now
Your trickling tears evaporate the pain
Our souls forever locked even though I lie in the depths

While you are praying up in the heavens
No matter how high up I can hear your whispers
Giving me strength to end this eternity
But tonight I'm burning in hell and it's all well so well-done
Eternal love

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
There is not much behind this write, I at the time had just begun to start singing when I was by myself at home or what ever. I happened to get a catchy line of 'Tonight I'm burning in hell and its all so well'. After a few ratings and comments I thought to myself I should treat this poem with more respect and found myself creating more than what I had expected. If anything, on my edit I wanted to make it even more in depth of how strong the love between the two characters within this sad tale go.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sharad Juneja 09 April 2012

another very intense and a beautiful poetry

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Anthony Han 25 December 2011

@Chey TruLuv Imaginaaatioon and well i was going through complicated times

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Lovable Wisdom 25 December 2011

i WONDER IF YHU WER GOING THRU SOMETHNG

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Romeo Della Valle 04 November 2011

Wait! Wait! Now that you finished this ardent, well penned and powerful write, it is time to take a break and take a glass of cold water, my dear friend! You did really great with this touching and moving write that clearly shows your poetic talent! 10+++ Keep it up! There is a long path to travel and go to the top of the Poetry World and you just started it. It is time to keep moving, my friend! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Fiona Davidson 02 June 2009

Amazingly vivid images in this excellent piece....thank you...10+++

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Monterey Park. Raised in H.H.
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