# Rain (Tanka) # Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

# Rain (Tanka) #

Rating: 5.0


The earth is arid,

The high sun rapes its green land,

Fury breaks the soil.

The habitat is dead now,

Only the rainfall can save!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 12 August 2009

The high sun rapes its green land, Fury breaks the soil....aridity very well described....good write.....10++

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Ency Bearis 14 July 2009

to its true...great verses to ponder......10

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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