Tuesday, April 20, 2010

Raindrops (C) 12-25-2010 Comments

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Wait ssh…can you hear it
I’m guessin not
Cause none of em every cries
No smart replies and none of em ever lies
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Zahir Kijani
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Seema Chowdhury 26 October 2010

nice and interesting profile. will surely read some of your poems. take care

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warner treuter 05 June 2010

I dunno, Corey; comments on syntax are the most legitimate of all comments and yet you won't find many if any even of those here on this site. All us poets are so sensitive, ya know. Should be able to get some legitimate reactions, though. But thanks for asking, anyway. I think your stuff is pretty well balanced and you are fairly upbeat. It shows in your poems. What more could a reader want? And it's good to be spreadable but, Spreadable man, meet the Vertical man. Takes all kinds. PS. You're a lucky poet to be so prolific.

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Ronald Stroman 30 May 2010

i hope you're not writing your poems from prison. i ain't spreadin' nothin' but BUTTER, and that goes on toast.yeah. i ain't got no problem spreadin' good news once and a while. take care. don't spread yourself too much. i got go now and click my knife before i read another poem.

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Marissa Garcia 28 May 2010

Thank for giving us a heads up!

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Dorian Suchelle 02 May 2010

hey this one was okay man

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Zahir Kijani

Zahir Kijani

Buffalo, New york
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