Friday, June 12, 2020

Raindrops Like Words Comments

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Raindrops fall on the earth
Like thoughts onto a piece
Of paper and flow ahead to
Make runnels and merge into rivers
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Varsha M 13 June 2020

Raindrops are mine Moisturizing every time I spend in your place Weaving my world sublime. Tiny, though it is Encompass great bliss For I'm the hose That supply rose. Raindrops are awesome Greminating thought that are wondersome. Beautifully expressed sir.

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Yoonoos Peerbocus 13 June 2020

fine analogy that enlightens the message

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Kostas Lagos 12 June 2020

Raindrops fall on the earth Like thoughts onto a piece Of paper Excellent!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 June 2020

A wonderful poem! Appreciated.....10++++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 June 2020

A marvelous write. that beautifully depicts how our thoughts are likened to raindrops when we put them into verses and weave them into poems. A well thought out and crafted poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 June 2020

Humble thanks for giving your precious time for reading and comment.

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