yoonoos peerbocus

Gold Star - 8,584 Points (05/08/1941 / Mauritius)

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Profession: Education Officer
Education: BA Hons 'English Lit' [London]
BA Hons 'International Relations' more »

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  • Christina Simmons Christina Simmons (7/21/2017 10:14:00 PM)

    It's the way you tell 'em. Definitely have the knack!

  • Sayyeda Insha  Rani Sayyeda Insha Rani (7/17/2017 8:46:00 AM)

    Sir plz check my poem on this site and find my mistakes.

  • Bri Edwards Bri Edwards (6/10/2017 3:20:00 PM)

    actually i believe it is POEMHUNTER'S ERROR. it seems they have put butterfly comments on this page for comments about the author!

  • Bri Edwards Bri Edwards (6/10/2017 3:18:00 PM)

    the last two comments were meant to go on the page for the poet's poem Butterfly. it is my error. bri: (

  • Bri Edwards Bri Edwards (6/10/2017 3:08:00 PM)

    PH changed my last comment a little bit. where the last comment now says a., please read as a period.

  • Bri Edwards Bri Edwards (6/10/2017 3:06:00 PM)

    to read and continue with commenting on this poem is a bit of a struggle for me. i can't understand how some readers seem to have no trouble with it. is it really my shortcomings? i DO have some, of course!

    check spelling of nourrish and the placement/use of a. where you might have wanted a comma.

    the poem seems to be about a butterfly, flowers etc., but i'm pretty sure it is symbolic in some places. i don't
    'do well' with reading symbolism.

    the wording, for me, is a bit too complex i think. if i had more computer time i might spend more of it on this poem.

    let me take a quick look at one more poem.

    bri :)

  • Sylvia Frances Chan Sylvia Frances Chan (5/1/2017 9:47:00 PM)

    Beautiful! Thanks for sharing.

  • The Poet Poet The Poet Poet (5/1/2017 11:38:00 AM)

    congrats poet
    so many comments
    ur WONDERFUL
    KEEP IT UP
    DIDN'T GET YOUR LAST MESSAGE

  • Samuel Achaka Samuel Achaka (7/10/2016 7:50:00 AM)

    good work sir, very interestingly pend down

  • Michael Scarcelli (6/2/2016 1:40:00 AM)

    Im enjoying reading your work.

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Best Poem of yoonoos peerbocus

A Hint At What Is Beautiful?

Beautiful is the 'thank you'
Wrapped with gratitude,
Offered to peace prone people
Who offer what is real-themselves
To nurse with love and humility
napalm asphyxiated victims
in our stained world

veiling ambition with face of
humanity.Beautiful is the moment
when sunlit world fades away
And with it mind made mirror
While look inward drawn, sight insight led,
and heart shuts out desire to let in
consciousness.

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