Rains 9: Awaiting Rains Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Rains 9: Awaiting Rains

Rating: 5.0


Wait not at the gate
O for rains each dying date,
Fret on weak walls' fate!
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Haiku |36.08.2019|

Tuesday, August 20, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: humour,rains
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Everyone in hot and dry places await rains' arrival. But here the Haiku warns: Do worry your weak walls' fate. Rain also means hardship for poor people.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 20 August 2019

A beautiful and meaningful haiku is cutely delineated by you dear Pathak sir. I appreciate this poem.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 August 2019

Thanks for such wonderful feedback KM.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 20 August 2019

A timely warning about the devastation that could be caused to dilapidated edifices and old, weak walls by torrential rains. Thanks for sharing.10 points. My epic of life 1 and 2 are named as epic of life part-1 and part-2. Thanks.

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 August 2019

Thanks for the feedback and rating RM

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Rajnish Manga 20 August 2019

Very sensible poem on rains as well as the problems that it may bring in its wake. Thanks, Sir.

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 August 2019

Thank you Dear RM for reading all them three with your excellent feedback.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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