Journey is lengthy and speech is too,
There is confusion in mind once more,
On walls plants grow if not maintained,
Rambling view of expressing is felt.
Usage of this word as adjective signifies,
Rambling jasmine is fragrant very much,
Usage of this word in noun is interesting,
Activity of walking is pleasurable in shore.
Walking with interest and pleasure we feel,
Beauty in countryside breezes in shore of sea,
Fragrance of rambling rose competes with,
Jasmine smiles and welcomes visitors here.
A rambling in a day brings light o mind,
Perfectly using perception in life's dignity,
Decisions we take to review mind's views,
Memories of moment of journey sing in love.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,5, July 2017. All rights reserve.
Rambling brings interesting light. Greatest love comes from God through light into Earth. We feel this. This is really great when love is transformed into light of love of wisdom. Love glows and grows with us. This is a great write and you are a nice poet.
I like to go rambling also and forget all my cares in this world for a while. Subtle use of a different shade of meaning of 'rambling'- rambling jasmine and roses. Magical.
A beautiful poem.....My favorite lines: Journey is lengthy and speech is too/There is confusion in mind once more/On walls plants grow if not maintained/Rambling view of expressing is felt...Thanks dear sir for sharing!
Light and love! Peace on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Usage of this word as adjective signifies, Rambling jasmine is fragrant very much, Usage of this word in noun is interesting, Activity of walking is pleasurable in shore. fine thinking dear poet Kumaramani. tony