Random Thoughts Poem by Yiyan Han

Random Thoughts

Rating: 5.0


You are walking towards the sea
As if you don't want others
To read your poetry and the distance
What could be in your mind?
Keep going and be swallowed in the sea
Or stand there and look into afar
The fishing lights on the opposite shore
Too long apart

By Yiyan Han(c)

2020-10-05
(Last modified 2020-11-04, The Chinese version was written on 2019-08-17)

Random Thoughts
Sunday, October 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: imagination,random thoughts
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Friend's photo, random thoughts, Hong Kong
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 26 October 2020

Or stand there and look into afar Wishing to see the fishing lights on the opposite shore- - - - -that is an image that stays in your reader's mind

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 October 2020

A well thought poem. Truly poetic....5 stars*****

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Varsha M 17 October 2020

Yes choices are ours always. The difference is when we chose one it defines our life next. Thank-you.

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Denis Mair 04 October 2020

This is a very poignant question. If a person takes time to gaze out to sea, something must be going through his/her mind. Why doesn't he share something with us? There must be something worth sharing.

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