! ! ! Rapture Poem by Rehan Hyder

! ! ! Rapture

Rating: 3.0


Underneath this palm
Underneath the burden
of divine indecision
of cloaking or exposing;
your magnolia fragrance
wrapped in deep red chiffons....
beckons to my senses seductively
weaving tales of slender curves
sung in the unending melody of “affirmatives”
and waltzed to with hands upon your neck
bending its peachy suppleness forward
wishing to entrap my rogue reckless wandering
in your inviting soothing comfort.
forever trapped..forever a slave
unto your beauty.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

magnolia fragrance wrapped in deep red ribbons (beautiful words) You have brought color, song, dance and perfume and wrapped in all title Rapture with great skill. Karin Anderson

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Rachel Butler 10 October 2009

sung in the unending melody of “affirmatives” Rachel Ann Butler

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Linda Ori 19 September 2009

A deeply sensual moment captured here, caught between reality and letting the imagination wander to its own conclusions. Beautifully expressed! Linda

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Ridge Cahill 02 December 2008

Strong and sublte, with the perfect words of expression to convey the emotions. Exellent.

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Francesca Martin 27 November 2008

Wonderful, wonderful, my friend. So passionate and yet relaxed. great!

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 26 November 2008

gosh..i love this piece...kudos!

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