Razor Blade Poem by Uche Nwanze

Razor Blade

Rating: 4.0


Radiant as the morning sun, a devious diva
tongue sharp like a razor blade.
Luscious Belle, blazing eyes like the daughter of the gods.
Elegant thighs, exquisite legs she walks like the goddess of the sun.
Fiery fangs, feisty as a ferocious cat. You don't wanna get burnt by her fire.
Curvaceous padded hips, gorgeous steps,
she walks with the swagger of a cheetah.
Ravishing, enchanting beauty. She'll be the death of me.
Sumptuous and succulent skin, she will sweep you off your feet.
Voluptuous and astonishing body, can't get her off my head.
Alluring, charming aura. I' m trapped in her lair.
Scintillating and seductive silhouette.
Her spell will spell doom for me.

Thursday, August 29, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,pain,seduction
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poem tells a story of beauty but behind the beauty is pain and trouble. All that glitters is not gold.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 02 September 2019

Razor blade, emotional outburst, powerful adjectives, but be careful, sharp blade cuts and gives rashes.

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Uche Nwanze 02 September 2019

You can say that again. Caution is the word, thanks for your comments Pathak.

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Kingsley Egbukole 29 August 2019

" Elegant thighs, exquisite legs she walks like the goddess of the sun. Fiery fangs, feisty as a ferocious cat. You don't wanna get burnt by her fire." Beautifully constructed. We need to be careful with beautiful things, even roses have thorns. Please red my poems " Dear Okwey" , Dear Chiaka" , " Love dreams" . Kingsley Egbukole

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Uche Nwanze 30 August 2019

I can't agree less, all that glitters is not gold. Thanks, will do.

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