Really Wonderful Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Really Wonderful

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Have you ever thought here?
Universe is wonderful seer.
About this creation we know
That is why soon again we bow.

Everywhere we spread vision,
We search do not get the reason.
Seasons come and go away soon,
Still flows in cycle in love his boon.

We think and think but do not get,
Exact answer goes away as we set.
We have met many times it is true,
But still properly we do not seefew.

Blue sky holds cloud holds rain,
Father comes, washes sins and pain.
Sky cries through rain drops more,
Sea cries thrashing head in its shore.

Far space spreads infinite distance,
Planets move in creation resistance.
He is great father nurtures in love,
We feel cheer while see a flying dove.


© Kumarmani Mahakul,12 February 2015. All rights reserved.

Friday, November 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,mind,nature,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 15 October 2019

This wide universe with its entire creatures is the great handiwork of God. We do not know much about the mysteries hiding here. Yet we feel happy seeing all the wonderful things of the universe and our hearts are filled with gratitude. When you see beauty you always connect it with God like a spiritual seer! Beautiful poem.

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Michael Walker 10 November 2016

A wonderful poem about God the Father and all the things which He has created. Very neat rhymed quatrains.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 November 2016

A flying dove. Nice piece of work.

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Akhtar Jawad 05 November 2016

Far space spreads infinite distance, Planets move in creation resistance. He is great father nurtures in love, We feel cheer while see a flying dove. Mahakul Ji is great as usual.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 November 2016

picture of Rishma Manna xReally beautiful! tfs :) 12 Feb 2015 by Rishma Manna | Reply picture of Kumarmani Mahakul xMany thanks dear Rishma. May God bless you and your family 12 Feb 2015 by Kumarmani Mahakul | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xAdorable poem tfs hugs 12 Feb 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of eleanor prince xLove the beautiful, lofty sentiments of your searching, reflective poem. Especially enjoyed: Sky cries through rain drops more, Sea cries thrashing head in its shore 16 Feb 2015 by eleanor prince | Reply picture of senthil nathan xYou have woven a beautiful piece of poetry, extolling God, who is the real wonder. Blue sky holds cloud holds rain, Father comes, washes sins and pain. Sky cries through rain drops more, Sea cries thrashing head in its shore. These are the most wonderful lines to me. Your poem only reveals your true nature....that you head is always kept in the direction of God. Nice and thank, Sir. 17 Feb 2015 by senthil nathan | Reply

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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