Realm Of Nature Poem by shrutika kahale

Realm Of Nature

Rating: 5.0


As i look at the sun rising in the sky,
i feel like a newborn,
i feel like failure is a lie.

the rays purify and inspire,
it gives the strength to aspire.

as i look at the breaking dawn,
i feel the spirit nature has turned on.
a new opportunity to soar and fly,
a new opportunity to live and die.

as i look at the clouds wandering aimlessly,
my every single vein gets filled with jealousy.
i desire to soar like the aimless clouds,
and reach aimless destination avowed.

as the wind longs to play with my hair,
as the wind kisses me all over,
i desire to go with it somewhere,
i feel like it is my lover!

as the sun sets and the changing color of sky pleases,
i wish that the time freezes.
as the sky turns black and the moon rises
purity, peace and love it symbolizes.

gradually the beautiful and silent night creeps,
looking at the twinkling stars and sky i fall asleep.

Friday, May 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 12 May 2016

The wonder and appreciation of nature is poetically written here with love and eloquence.

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Shrutika Kahale 22 May 2016

thank you so much for going through my poem and placing your comment. thanks a loy nks

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Tom Billsborough 06 May 2016

You commented on my i am here poem. I wasn't sure whether I'd read any of yours. Actually I've read three and been very impressed by your faultless sense of rhythm. But there is much more to you than just rhythm. I am sure this is the best poem I've read today. It is very inspiring and beautifully composed. It's a certain 10. Tom Billsborough

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Shrutika Kahale 07 May 2016

thankyou so much for you kind appreciaton, n rating my work as 10.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 May 2016

I feel like a new born! Thanks for sharing.

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Shrutika Kahale 06 May 2016

my pleasure edward. thankyou

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Halin Roche 06 May 2016

beautiful poem shrutika.... ;)

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Shrutika Kahale 06 May 2016

thankyou so much ransom

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