Introduction: Life is a mystery with many ups and downs throughout the journey. The journey filled with thoughts of tranquility and turmoil. But the perfect sensation is the time when you get to feel closer to your Almighty, the one who understands you the best, your closest friend, your hope and light, your solution to every problem, The mystery you came to life to solve and to believe in. Even in the happiest and the saddest moments, He is always there when you need Him.
Right now I am, thinking what to write
Holding my pen, it's almost midnight,
I'm truly out of words, to express my whole life,
It's so absurd, cut all pain through a knife
And I wish I could feel, Your presence in my soul
I know that You know, what I am going through
And I'm not sure I believe, unless I really feel
But I know when You're not there, so I pray to feel You near
Now I can see, what this life is about
Now I do know, I'm too lost without,
Diamond in the rough, that's what I was
But now I'm reborn by the shower of Your bliss
I'd die to satisfy, I'd do everything I can,
No matter how tough, after all I'm a man
I won't fall apart, You're always in my heart
I'd swim oceans and more, only to be Your friend
This undying grace of Your creation,
Time and space, more than perfection
You've opened my eyes and showed me the truth
You've blessed peace to my soul; I know what's my role
I see two key coins, one black and one white
And all I have to join, the one with Your light
Life is as it is, we make it our own
Hard or easy, full or alone
Everything grows, as they all involve
With the rose you put down, to show us what's love
I wake up early, to see Your beauty,
Throughout the morning sun, I feel complete and done,
I drive all the way and see my problems solved,
By Your love from above, I stand still so firm
Everything I do, everywhere I go,
Every moment I breathe, I remind myself of You...My Almighty.
An excellent write, my friend. Highly spiritual and I like that.It has an excellent flow that makes for an easy read but it is also loaded with substance. I believe that we have the ability to develop our talent but the talent itself is a gift from God and we certainly should always acknowledge him in all that we do. I see a great deal of talent in your writing. Thanks Richard
Outstanding work! Your poems are rich and fine! Constance Yost
Very good indeeed. nice flo. I like the flow.
Dude....THIS-IS-POETRYYYYYYYYY! I love this poem. This is one of my favorites. BOOKMARK BUTTON ACTIVATE!
The introductory plot is brilliant.A well appreciated work and splendid write.
The last 3 lines have a real falling intonation, well planned lines bro
Wow! Am tongue-tied i would comment bt no words to much ya' benazir, excellent
am really out of words cuz this is just awesome! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! you're really talented and i adore you.keep it up
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This thing is nothing more than an amateurish sermon, so far as I can tell. There is a glimpse perhaps of something poetical now and again, but the total sum equates to no more than a prayer with a quirky and (won't name it) agenda. You can't fool me with dictates developed for a desert people a 1000 years ago. Forget about it: I'm an atheist already. I believe that science holds all the keys to the questions of existence. Period.