Sunday, March 29, 2015

Recognizing The Lies Comments

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Am I paying for someones elses crimes?
Living off of someone elses good times.
When we lie, do we do it for the good of all mankind.
Little voices to remind.
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Roseann Shawiak 29 March 2015

Very intense and insightful look recognizing lies, trying to reconcile them with feelings of regret, flaws of human nature, never really finding any answers, lost in a fog, trying to find one's own way for survival in this world. Honest and recognizable traits of mankind, great write! ! Rhythmic rhyming clear through, sublime imagery. Thank you, RoseAnn

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Kelly Kurt 29 March 2015

-thank you for sharing your poem. I enjoyed it.

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