The cars move slowly
At a snails pace in the street
Their tail lights flashing
Like embers burning so bright
Red lights trailing in the dark
This is a wonderful Tanka my dear friend Nudershada...loved this poem.
Their tail lights flashing Like embers burning so bright. short and sweet. u packed a lot in such short poem.. thank u dear poetess. tony
Tail lights of slowly moving car are flashing amazingly in metro road. In the dark red lights are giving us trailer. This poem is very amazing and brilliantly penned...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great imagery of cars eating the highway.+++10