Relationships Comments

I think we can put back air into a deflated balloon. Punctured or equivalent word might be better. Nice poem.

Relationships are multy-dimensional, multifaced and these have been depicted in this beautiful poem.Nice to read.

Date-Time: 9/19/2009 10: 36: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: hi --- 'determines life at each stage' is all you have to know about the title of this poem in my opinion. I'm a little surprised you haven't tapped into this subject more head on earlier. I think you put some good thought into this, Indira. It's got a stark honesty to it that sweeps under you as you go through it. I know it's a subject that's at the very core of who you are especially. I'm sure you could add volumes to it if you wanted. Brett Ackerman

whatever, each relationship adds a new dimension to life and determines life at each stage Rachel Ann Butler

a very simple and endearing piece.... soft and soothing to read. loved it. and one should maintain relationships too.... lest they glide away softly, like some faraway clouds, softly lingering... some obscurities, unreachable.

expressed so beautifully...well done!

Great similes and metaphors......profound piece in relationships...well penned...10+++++++++++