Relationships Poem by Colette Dright

Relationships

Rating: 4.8


Relationships start off like oh so right
Making love damn near every single night
Dancing, the movies, going out bowling
Cracking so many jokes, I'm on the floor rolling
Rolling with smiles and oh such laughter
You were what I thought was my forever after
Everyone knew that it was just us two
The vibes and love between us just grew
Grew so strong, but then it all went wrong

Here comes the nagging, the bickering and doubt
Along with the lies, the hanging and sleeping out
Who are these other girls calling yo phone
Dem' girls don't know, they better leave you alone
But I don't just blame them, it's yo fault too
Cause cheatin' with them was somethin' you chose to do

Arguing and fussing, raising yo voice and cussing
Words were said out of frustration
I took those words into consideration
What happened to the smiles, the good times and fun
What happened to the Bonnie and Clyde moments on the run
What happened to our "Just Us" moments in time
Wow, how I wish I could simply press rewind

This relationship is not what I thought was meant to be
So for me to have peace of mind, I decided to be free
I knew what I had to do and as a lady, I didn't react
I knew that once I left, there would be no turning back
I didn't run, I didn't hide
I waited patiently for the sun to rise
I didn't kiss him in the end
Nor did I kiss him the first day this began

Saturday, May 23, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: break up,breaking up,broken heart,cheating,disappointment,hurt,love,love and life,relationship,relationships
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Please read the poem, the audio play takes away from my poetry. It does not recite my poems with the expressions written.
As for this poem, I wrote this poem to reflect on how in time the fun fades and couples can tend to lose interest. You have to work together for longevity in relationships. It requires trust, communication, love, laughter and most definitely prayer.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr. Antony Theodore 17 January 2021

how in time the fun fades and couples can tend to lose interest. You have to work together for longevity in relationships. It requires trust, communication, love, laughter and most definitely prayer. Liked your poet's notes. truly we have to work a life long to keep the relationships in tact. tony

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 May 2020

A well expressed poem. Simply amazing .....10+++

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Khairul Ahsan 23 May 2020

A lovely poem you've written, dear poet. Loved the substance and the rhyme too. 'I didn't run, I didn't hide I waited patiently for the sun to rise' - yeah, that's the way! Excellent! And thanks for the Poet's Notes too. Loved what you've said.

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