Releasing Poem by JoAnn McGrath

Releasing

Rating: 5.0


It's not a departure
of arrow from archer.

Or a blast from the past
in hopes it will last.

No......it wasn't passed gas
You thought that! ...You A**!

It's the act, you see
and you would agree

I'll get down on my knees
to say thank you and please

I'll try and let go
of all that I've sowed

Then I'll say goodbye
to the sins I deny

So I can be free
to be closer to thee

...Amen


1 April 2007

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Harris 07 April 2007

JoJo, I just love the clever use of words you used it this one. The meaning was crystal clear and it was as beautiful as the poem. Top Marks from me. Thank you for sharing it. David.

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Theresa Moore 07 April 2007

A clever path of words used as a means to reach the divinity :)

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Marci Made 01 April 2007

Free to be ~~~~~~~~~~ah freedom, first from ourselves, then from the past, then we can fly with the wings of angel and soar and forever be free to be 'we' as we want to be..........thanks for this jojo~~~~~~~~~~~hugs, marci.... (goodness, you have many good words releasing today! ! !)

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