Remain With Father Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Remain With Father

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Remain with father dear brother,
Light of ocean he is do not bother.
Fear cannot touch also the danger.
Love binds always with a stranger.

Mind thinks and plans one action,
Practice brings sure in life perfection.
There is no obstacle present for us,
While we are near father, think thus.

How far life is shiny we understand,
Below the shed of a tree soon we stand.
Courage within us comes as boon sure,
Near father always we all remain pure.

We march ahead with new hope vision,
Everywhere we spread lovely season.
Fragrance spreads touching new direction,
We feel and realize our father's vibration.

Now we want to check the life style,
Every step is filled with sure new smile.
Conveying the regards to other we walk,
God is the great creator father super monk.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,21 December 2014. All rights reserved.

Monday, October 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 24 October 2016

picture of Fay Slimm xA grand piece of work which reminds us to stay close to our caring Father - I just loved the expression you used in the fourth stanza - we can realize our father's vibrations - -that is such a beautiful thought and thank you Kuma for sharing it with us. 21 Dec 2014 by Fay Slimm | Reply picture of heather wilkins xnear father always we all remain pure lovely thought 21 Dec 2014 by heather wilkins | Reply picture of Joseph Anderson xVery reverant, filled with many uplifting thoughts A joyous poem of faith and hope-very good indeed 22 Dec 2014 by Joseph Anderson | Reply picture of Kanyanta Ngandu xLike this one. 27 Dec 2014 by Kanyanta Ngandu | Reply

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 November 2019

Love binds always with a Stranger! ! ! ! ! ! 💖💡🎶🖋 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 November 2019

Nice one.. good logic.. clear 10 you remained strength for me as ever and did not allow to develop fear I find him next to deity this is the reason he appears me above everybody Hasmukh Mehta

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Pushpendra Patel 27 February 2019

Remaining with God is great. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.

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Rebecca Navarre 23 December 2017

Ever Such Beautiful Feel! ! ! ! ! Ever So Deeply Heart Touching! ! ! ! ! Ever Such Beautiful Spirit Here! ! ! ! ! Beautifully Inspiring! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 1OS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Rebecca Navarre 24 October 2016

I Love Your Words Sir! ! ! ! So True! ! ! So Deep And Tender! ! ! So Very Precious! ! ! Touched Heart And Made Me Smile! ! ! Thank You So Much For Sharing This! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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