Remember my existence in your deaam,
You can also visualize my words in your day-dream.
I am far away from you,
I am waiting everyday for you.
Your message comes to me as a wave,
I feel my mind is also in rave.
Remember my existence in your poetry,
I get refreshment from your poetry.
I am an unworthy person for you,
I do everything for you.
Your message makes me cheerful,
I feel my mind becomes peaceful.
Remember my existence in your daily work,
Like the Holy Work, I memorise you in my work.
For you, I am a devoted person,
For love, I am an honest person.
Your message makes me hungry,
For you, I feel thirsty.
Remember my existence as a helpless man,
I worship you as an ideal woman.
I need your sympathy,
For me, you always show empathy.
Your message comes to me as a hope,
For you, in darkness I grope.
Remember my existence as an admirer,
I am really your true lover.
Sanju 25-6-2009
(I dedicate the poem to a lady whom I love but she doesn't believe. She once cofessed that she loves me)
nice two similes and anaphora in the same time: ''Remember my existence as a helpless man, I worship you as an ideal woman.'' of this lyric poem..10+
wowwwwww lovely words dear Sanjib-- truely lovely see when in love how nice words emanate it comes straight from the heart-- but still--one has to be realistic in life one cannot just fall in love with any one just for a song. One has to be practical in life Hope this person whom you are in love will be a great source of inspiration for you and make you one of the greatest poets here whatever--I welcome you here to poemhunter and for this lovely poem a straight tenner from meeeeeeeeee anjali
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very eloquent. We all want our existence to be remembered. May your poems live beyond the calendar. Kind wishes, Sandra