Remember My Existence Poem by Sanjib Das

Remember My Existence

Rating: 5.0


Remember my existence in your deaam,
You can also visualize my words in your day-dream.
I am far away from you,
I am waiting everyday for you.
Your message comes to me as a wave,
I feel my mind is also in rave.

Remember my existence in your poetry,
I get refreshment from your poetry.
I am an unworthy person for you,
I do everything for you.
Your message makes me cheerful,
I feel my mind becomes peaceful.

Remember my existence in your daily work,
Like the Holy Work, I memorise you in my work.
For you, I am a devoted person,
For love, I am an honest person.
Your message makes me hungry,
For you, I feel thirsty.

Remember my existence as a helpless man,
I worship you as an ideal woman.
I need your sympathy,
For me, you always show empathy.
Your message comes to me as a hope,
For you, in darkness I grope.

Remember my existence as an admirer,
I am really your true lover.


Sanju 25-6-2009

(I dedicate the poem to a lady whom I love but she doesn't believe. She once cofessed that she loves me)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 11 October 2009

Very eloquent. We all want our existence to be remembered. May your poems live beyond the calendar. Kind wishes, Sandra

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Marieta Maglas 13 July 2009

nice two similes and anaphora in the same time: ''Remember my existence as a helpless man, I worship you as an ideal woman.'' of this lyric poem..10+

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Chitra - 27 June 2009

Sir, a heart wrenching poem,10+

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Eyan Desir 25 June 2009

Interesting good write 10

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Anjali Sinha 25 June 2009

wowwwwww lovely words dear Sanjib-- truely lovely see when in love how nice words emanate it comes straight from the heart-- but still--one has to be realistic in life one cannot just fall in love with any one just for a song. One has to be practical in life Hope this person whom you are in love will be a great source of inspiration for you and make you one of the greatest poets here whatever--I welcome you here to poemhunter and for this lovely poem a straight tenner from meeeeeeeeee anjali

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